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August 27

Descriptive Writing by Joshua

RENA.
Splash!!! Water and oil was everywhere. Screaming helicopters flying above. String and containers falling heavily into the black sea. Fish dying and floating up to surface covered in black oil. Rena cracking, oil spilling out of the Rena like blood pouring out of a possum.

By Joshua M.

5 comments |

5 comments:

  1. Libby
    27 August 2012 at 15:12

    Nice witing looks awesome.

  1. Mary-Ann
    27 August 2012 at 17:58

    Another dramatic beginning to your descriptive writing. Again lots of great words used. Well done

  1. Mrs Te Whaiti
    27 August 2012 at 19:05

    You really captured the disgusting scene well Josh. That simile was well written - you really thought hard about your choice of words. Keep up this great work.

  1. Sonny
    29 August 2012 at 08:19

    Cool discriptive writing about the RENA!!!

  1. caitlin
    26 September 2012 at 18:52

    cool writing josh!!

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